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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:55 pm

*takes off my helmet revealing my face* well then viper. your orders are for now to stand down as i explore this cave with general Fisto *walks into the cave with general fisto*
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Post  rouge Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:06 pm

*smiles a little under my helmit and turns on my voice changer and seys,as i stand straight and salute*sir,clone number v378665f sir.my brothers call me viper sir.*still saluting as i continue to use my voice changer to change my voice to sound more like a guy and i say*specalty weapon tech,snier 1st class,long range expert,hand to hand expert,stelth expert,and bilingual study sir.i am the secand best clone ranced to the gold quad,my new suit proves i have just ben created recently,but sir,please do not take that fact seriously,my skills prove to be best of the best sir.i await any orders you have to give sir.*slautes once more and stands at attencion and doesnt notice the diferances between my seuit and my brothers seuits seems to stand out more clearly now*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Tue Feb 10, 2009 6:38 pm

*gets up denying any medical help then i walk to rouge* Hmm....You look different from the others...Trooper whats your name?
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Post  rouge Sat Feb 07, 2009 11:21 am

*i resieve the message and respond quickly*copy that commander lyner i see you and shall bring half my men to the rendevue allong with several suplys.*i stand and use the sight on my gun to scout the area and find the commander and after that i jump off the top of the ship that carrys clones (the one with several doors on each side and strap from the seiling to hold onto when the ship moves.i forgot what its called)and after pointing to several men i motion for them to fallow me and i strap my sniper gun to my back and start heading for the rendevue.as we arrive with the suplys a med clone starts to treat any wounds the cammander and wo ever is with him may have.i stay a few feet away and stand guard watching our surroundings and keeping an eye on the rest of my men.this is when you notice theres some thing odd about the way my suit is built and you notice my stance is more femanin and girish than the other clone brothers.thats when you remember my voice sounded slightly strange on the com link*
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Post  Commander Lyner Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:16 pm

*i turn my com link to rouge's group*Hello this is commander lyner. Im requesting immediate assistance to a group of my men and General Fisto not to far from your location. I have a group of my men on their way to them as well. Can u rendevue?*i wait for a repsonce and motion to commander zach that his shineys have arrived*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:18 pm

*stnads still as i salute* Yes sir! *sits down as i begin to look around noticing there are about 10 survivors General fisto and I* im so bored. i want to go exploring
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Post  rouge Wed Feb 04, 2009 4:22 pm

(i hope its ok i just jump into the rp.i didnt know how elce to start.you can change any thing you think should be changed)
*a small ship carrying a few back up troops arrives close to the cave where the jedi and Elite Trooper Crusoe is and as it lands it make shure to land close to the explosion so the trops can atack and save any one who is still there.as the ship lands and the doors opeain it reveals a new groop of shineys and a few more experieanced but equally new troops.theres one there whos armer is made a little diferent and it looks slightly more girlish.the armer is shiney and its a misture of silverish grey and whight cammo.the desighn on the armer is sorta like scales and the wrist guards are snakes mouths.there is a lardge snake desighn curling arround the clones side and the helmit is like a lardge snakes head eating the clones head.the clone is wearing a rather heavy sniper laser riffel on its back.there is also a rather old looking laser sword atached to her left hip,not a lightsaber,more like a katanna with a laser blade edge.the clone is given a few orders and climbs ontop of the ship the clones arrive on ad sets up her sniper riffel in less than ten secands.the clone deffanitly looks verry strange and its allmost like it is a girl clone,alltho you cant tell from a distance*
Ships driver:allright men,listen up.your the new members of the gold team,this is most of you shineys first mission,dont screw it up.protect any servivers you find,distroy any clankers.i have allredy contacted the gold leeder of our arrival and general skywalker has agreed that a few new membes wouldnt hurt.some one should be allong shortly to pick up the suplys on this ship and they will be your leeder untill you meet the gold cammander.make us all proud and please,dont make a fool of your self.
*we all say sir yes sir and a small parrimeter is set up arround te wreckage of the exploaded ship and a few clones are sent to surch for survivers.the driver of the ship takes off and leaves a few crates of suplys behind incase they are needed.*
oh boy,i hate this job allredy.theres nothing arround for miles,nothing but sand sand and more sand.for christ sakes,why couldnt they send me on a mission where we would get some action.*i say in a slightly agravaited but more boerd tone of voice as i continue to scout the area with my sniper riffel scope*
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Post  Commander Zach Sun Jan 11, 2009 8:21 am

both of you calm down or im gonna be charged with treason....and im with Lyner on this one....i would die for my men and die with them.....

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Post  Commander Lyner Thu Jan 01, 2009 3:56 am

You little piece of filth...you dont know what its like being a true commando...*pushes him away and puts my dc-15 pistol back in the holster and then send a com to master fisto*com:Sir have you confirmed the ambush of the squad from Cringe Regiment last week?
Master Fisto:Yeah we found em Lyner but they are all dead and me and the backup that just landed just piked em all off.
Me:So we finally got some backup. Who is it?
Master Fisto: He says he is Elite Trooper Crusoe
Me: Ah that one. Alright he is good. He usually takes off to explore right after every mission. Im glad he made it in time.
Master Fisto: Yeah. We will return to the base juist as soon as we finish off the ones ion the cave.
Me: Right but sir i would suggest getting some backup from my men. Ill send the Quint squad from Relo to back you up sir.
Master Fisto: Right good luck to you Lyner
Me:Same to you General Fisto Sir.*i turn the channel to contact Crusoe*com:Hey trooper have im sending you and General fisto some backup. Its gonna be th quint squad. If you forgot it consists of Commander Hoffman,Dizzy,Tai,Marcus,Dom,and Baird(ive been playing to much Gears XD) Now dont move into that cave until they arrive. Wait for backup and then move in as a group. Until then do recon on any activity on that cave. Am i understood?
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Post  mugen09 Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:08 pm

*He laughs.* You're talking like we're actually teammates or something this mission is the only mission i'll tag along with you on so please remove the pistol from my neck......unless you want to be confined for treason and then sentenced to death.....

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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:54 pm

*flys into tatooine onboard a suwantek then i get out with first my leader walking out first then the troop then i as i escort Master fisto to a secret location i urn around and begin to gaurd rear then as i call the all clear an explosion happened at the location then i run in to see half the squadron on the floor then i gasp as i see the commander on the ground motionless* No... master fisto what has happened? Kit Fisto: An explosion set off by the droids *i see droids around then i pull out my sniper and Kit Fisto throws me up then i settle down on a cliff picking off droids one by one with headsot after headshot while master fisto takes out the rest and the rest of the living Squadron walk into a cave and begin to look for medication then i jump down as the droid ambush is finally over i sigh then i look for medications as well*
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Post  Commander Lyner Sun Dec 21, 2008 12:41 pm

*i pull out my DC-15 pistol and put it to his neck*Dont you ever talk about Relo like that...you wont do well with my men if you keep talking like that..
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Post  mugen09 Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:17 am

meh it's your choice you'll see how you're going to fill when they're all murdered in front of you or something...*Turns towards the other one.* What about you....

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Post  Commander Lyner Sat Dec 20, 2008 8:10 pm

(its around 200 men)

I would rather be with my men then be alone. I would die with these men and for these men. You obviously dont know that feeling of being in a group as long as you can remember...these men are like me...these men are like my brothers,my twins. We think alike...I would never give up this job...
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Post  mugen09 Fri Dec 19, 2008 4:12 pm

Tell me commander...do you like your job?...do you like the fact that you always command a group of maybe 50 to a hundred....would you like it if they all died under your command?.....do you think you could cope with that?......this job Promotion!......is a far better job in my opinion than your current one.....plus you ride solo as you can see for myself

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Post  Commander Lyner Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:45 pm

We are already top ranked officers...how would we get promotions?*starts to reload the gas in his DC-15S rifle*Hmmm...
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Post  mugen09 Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:23 pm

It's for a job promotion....

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Post  Commander Lyner Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:06 am

Why in the world should we tell this information to you?
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Post  mugen09 Sun Dec 14, 2008 3:40 am

*He looks back at then as he pulls out a small note book.* So... can you two tell me your best attributes?....think of this...like an interview...

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Post  Commander Lyner Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:13 pm

Hmmm...alright sakito...make sure to destroy any clankers you see..if we arent back in one hour...do something about it...*i follow mugen as well*
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Post  Commander Zach Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:50 pm

ok fine....Sakito and Waller remain here with rex.... *i follow Mugen*

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Post  mugen09 Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:57 pm

Only three people Me you and the one with the gun anymore and that's too much...*He fixes his tan cloak.* Now can we please go we cannot waste time here arguing....lives are at stake....

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Post  Commander Lyner Thu Dec 11, 2008 8:17 pm

Now wen will be going somewere now..*sends a message to my men saying make a perimeter that boards up any known exits...make sure none of those clankers escape*
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Post  Commander Zach Thu Dec 11, 2008 8:13 pm

SO will Captain waller *looks at rex* you and the others find the rest of those clankers....

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Post  Commander Lyner Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:47 pm

My captain,Genesis, will be coming with us also...
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