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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:56 pm

with all due respects sir...neve bow to one who is not more supirrior or skilld than you.and in my case,never will be...*bows to the jedi and to you and i start to wlk off in the same direction i was in befour.as i round the corner and find a long wall of bock and a cliff i smile a little and walk to the edge and then i begin climbing down the side of the cliff and then as i gt a few feet down i leap off onto the other side and i begin to climb the other side of the cliff so i can reach the top and continue to explore and clear my mind.the jedi could easally tell without even having to probe my mind to much,that im full of doubt,confusion,and concern*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:53 pm

*bows instead of saluting* you will go with me and kit himself while the squadron stays here and heals *walks up* i am different from the rest
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:45 pm

i dont understand you sir...your..diferent from the other leeders...you dont tret me the same...i just dont understand you.*after pulling out my voice changer i put my helmit on and then strap my gun to my back and to my thy and then sighing once i stand at attension and salute t jedi and then i say*im going to go scout the area now sir...permission to gather my toughts....an escort or partner will be accepted if you think its best not to go alone sir.*saluts te clone leeder*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:41 pm

*walks towards viper* Look. think of this. with an elite trooper and kit here there isnt anything we cant do. now put that helm on and salute the jedi with enthusiasm!
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:40 pm

*catches the wepons and the helmit only to hold the helmit in my hands and say*sir.i...i cant go on as a troop member....what good is a clone who cant hide the simple fact that SHES diferent....what good is a week feeble female body compared to strong well traind men.iv allredy lied to you once..and to my brothers...how could any of you accept me now...iv lost your trust..a clone cant survive without any one to trust.with all due respects sir..i cant go on a clone...im not as good as the rest of you.this scar is prof of it..i...i faild my first mission,and all my brothers died because of my incompatance...i cant go on and be the reson any one elce dies.*still hasnt raisd my head*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:34 pm

*i give a signal then the clones lower thier weapons then kit and i smile* women arent allowed. i was mad at first but you know i dont see whats wrong. as an elite trooper my orders are to secure fisto and the squadron. you are a part so i welcome you now as....viper i guess. *tosses you back your weapons and helm*
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:31 pm

*gasps as my long dar blackish red hair falls down across my shoulders and i shake a little as the lardge burn mark like scar can be seen across the right half of my face and i hang my head and say*i....im sorry sir...im..im a fail clone sir...a freek acadent...im just a faild attempt to create a clone with an added strength and flexabillaty sir...i dont know how it happend..but...some how,duing the cloning prosess,female dna was dropd into my incubation tank...there fore i...i grey as a woman sir...i had order to hide my flaw as best i could sir....i woulld feel no regret or hatred if you dismissd me from the clone ranks sir.*hangs my head and sighs quietly as i take my laser sniper rofel from my back and i toss it to the ground at your feet and then i toss my standerd clone laser gun to your feet aswell.i then stand there looking ashaimd as i wate for my punishment for lying to the camander.even my clone brothers gaspd and backd away a little,some even aimd there weapons at me fearing i was a spy*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:20 pm

*in the blink of an eye kit fisto removes rouges helm to reveal every thing* Viper your voice changer broke. also you are walking very feminine. now. explain yourself viper.
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:17 pm

wemen..what..what are you talking about sir..sence when were clones ever wemen..dont you remember were all made the same...whats the matter.the memory part of your brain a little under developed?you know as well as all the others that there are no wemen clones...im just the same as all the rest of you.*sounds verry nervious as i say all this and im fidgitting arround kinda fooling with the snake shaped wrist guards on my seuit as i kick a few rocks on the ground and laugh as i say*hell if there were any wemen on this team i gess it wouldnt be as damb boring now would it brother?*still hasnt relised my voice changer is broake and so i havent relised the other clones arent laughing because they are all a little wierded out.*what...whats the mater with you people?
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:12 pm

*takes off my helmet and i raise an eyebrow* and also since when were women allowed to join our ranks?
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:09 pm

*doesnt even flench when the shot is fired and wen the man apears in frunt of me i allmost slam my fist into his face by reflex but i controle myself and simply turn and say*WHAT THE FUCK..IM ON YOUR SIDE! have you gone absolutly insane?*walks back over to the cave and simply leans agenst the roc ad stares at you with my arms cossed,witch doesnt relly help me hide my true self*explain what?whats there to explain,im going for a walk to scout the area..were allredy low on suplys,the ones y men and i brought arent going to last anouther atack,and im just trying to find a better place to hide..what elce is there to explain?
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 6:05 pm

*a laser flies past your head by a fraction of an inch then i yell* Clone Viper! Get over here! i want a good explenation for this! *kit appears in front of viper*
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:59 pm

*looks slightly confused as i stare at you boath and say*am i ok...your the ones who just got blown from a cave...dang your wierd.*still hant relised my voice changer is broaken and hasnt noticed the other clones staring at me like im some sort of freek.i simply shrug and continue to walk arround*im heading off to patrole the area..you can coe if you like,im just tired of sitting in one spot.*starts to walk arround the corner of the cave and heads off tword the other side*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:38 pm

*shortly after viper walks away from the cave an explosion occurs as me and kit are thrown out of the cave and i land next to viper on my feet and so does kit then i stand straight* All clear! Viper are you ok? you are walking funny
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Post  rouge Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:26 pm

what the hell is taking them so damn long..i know they want to make shure there is no threat to us in the cave but,palease..its ben atleast a few hours...this job bites,id allmost rather be the one guarding and taking care of that hq wayyy out on the edge of the border of that uncharted area place closes to our home planet where we were born...dang this is boring.im going to go scout the area,atleast a quiet walk would be less boring.*still doesnt relise my voice changer is messed up and now im talking in my normal female voice witch is slightly soft but kinda harsh and rather jusical.my voice is verry diferent from the other clones and now that iv started walking and im carrying my snpier rifer on my back my body movments are more femanin aswell.basicly iv just blown my cover as a female clone.i start walking away from the cave headed off into the deasert a little ways just to get a little movment befour my body goes into a state of bordome coma*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:09 pm

*puts all my gear in thier holders as we run full speed as me and kit are apparently running the same speed i say* Kit how far until we reach the destination? Kit: not far young clone. *we continue running until we reach the center*
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Post  rouge Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:58 am

must have ben nothing or they would have came out.my thurmal scanner can barely pick up there body heat,the cave must get colder the farther they go inside it.hope there going to be allright.*i say as i return to my post close by the cave and i begin cleaning my sniper laser riffel,not noticing my voice changer in my helmit was damaged some how when the explosion happend and now my voice is allmost its normal womans voice.i sit on the rocky ground and take my lardge weapon apart in secands and start thurrally cleaning it inside and out*
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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:33 pm

*sits in the cave wondering about the explosion barely caring* Kit how far in here are we? Kit fisto: possibly about 3 miles or more Me: well it doesn matter i dont care im bored. lets go deeper.
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Post  rouge Tue Feb 17, 2009 2:23 pm

*i leap off the top of the cave carrying my sniper laser rifel in my arms and i turn tword the cave and look for any sighn of the enamy.as i do this i simply say,with my voice disguiser still actave to make me sound like a guy.*i am clone number v378665f sir.my brothers cale me viper.cant think of a reson why*doesnt even relise i leapd off the cave roof and spun in air so face it made me look like i was gifted with a vipers reflexes.also doesnt relize im standing with my body turnd to the side as my feet face forward and i point the gun at the cave.my body looks like i turnd up upse half and my lower half stayd perfectly still.its odvious im double jointed or extremely flexabole*
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Post  Captain Waller Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:49 pm

*The ground rock violently as an explosion is heard from the cave,sending out a cloud of dust,but coughing can be heard*



(Sorry I took so long rouge)

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Post  Genesis22 Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:38 pm

(thanks fox)

*tries to get to the commander* sir we...*looks at rouge* who are you


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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:37 pm

(uhhh treason over i landed with general fisto and rouge just jumped in thats about it)
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Post  Genesis22 Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:55 pm

(somebody fill me in please, I've been gone for a really long time$)

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Post  Elite trooper Crusoe Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:21 pm

*i notice all these feminine features but i keep it to myself as Fisto and i run down teh cave*
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Post  rouge Wed Feb 11, 2009 1:37 pm

sir yes sir*still disguising my voice as i salute once more and turn and walk down the slightly slanted hill leading to the wreckd ship and the rest of my men.as i walk you notice its slightly different from the other brothers walk,more femanin and slightly girlish.when i reach the rest of my men i order them to set up a nice strong parimater arround the cliff and cave,hiding where ever thay can and keeping a close watch for the enamy and our allies.i then return to the cave and climb to the top of the entrance and i set up my sniper rifel and i lay on my belly beide it redy to strike when nessacarry.as i climb some of the men notice i seem to be more flexabole than a normal clone and as i lay on my elly my chest seems to be more defind*
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